I noticed a few, small errors. They are as follows:
1) The title of the article on page 17 should have a comma. It should read, "A Lonely Dance On a Cold, Northern Shore."
2) In the table of contents, "Antissa Part I" should read, "Eclipse, Lord of the Mountain."
3) Kayla's stat block on page 16 should read, "Perception +0" after her Initiative in light of her Wisdom score penalty. Also, because she is human, she gains an extra skill rank with each level. Therefore, she should have the following under her skills: Bluff +3, Perception +0, Sleight of Hand +1.
Hopefully, these fixes should be easy enough to pencil in.